Tuesday, August 6, 2013

Oedipus Wrecks



The space between the earth and skies
No exit found between your thighs.

And every time we plumb those depths
Lament we haven't found it yet.

I know this was the portal in.
Why won't it take me back again?

And every time I lie awake
I pray the Lord my soul to take.

But soul remains here wrecked on earth.
It's hunger bound and parched of thirst.

I sought oasis 'neath the skies
Yet found no fount between your thighs.

What siren song be-sung is this?
To shipwreck sailors seeking bliss.

And every time we lie, I die.
What beckons me between your thighs?

The body comfort?  That's too base!
We'd rather rise to higher place!

I found distraction in your mind
Yet soul did yearn for other climes.

The depths we plumb, the heights we climb
And both they fail to pierce sublime!

The ample curves are so adored
A body portal, something more?

It houses something in that skin
Which portal did you enter in?

With source beyond the earth and skies
it took no birth between those thighs.

Which gate is it you entered through?
And can you take us back with you?

We plumb the depths, yet can't say why.
We scale the heights, can't pierce the sky

The space between where I reside.
Which portal did you enter by?

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This is probably my first long poem with a disciplined meter throughout (iambic tetrameter, try saying that five times fast).  I guess I usually do just straight masculine rhyme, and am quite lax on the meter (it may change from line to line or stanza to stanza) if it's there at all.  It was pretty fun exercise being disciplined for a change, I think I'll try some more.

4 comments:

  1. very nice cadence man...pretty cool verse too...a couple ways to take that ' between the thighs' could be sexual reference and what we try to fill our lives with...could also be a play on rebirth as well...

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  2. ha - just saw your link and thought that obi wan may have linked up with us at dVerse - he surely had a few stories to tell and some poems to write...smiles.. ok - forgive me - now to your poem...oy..

    i too like the cadence and the poem makes much sense coming from the title... the birth canal and also the gate to find a bit of redemption... the act being more like sex... you really take this to a spiritual place...

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  3. My pen prefers iambic tetrameter and I find that when I try to change it, I struggle. Wonderful rhythm and a great deal of food for thought.

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